Tag: Media

IVC writing workshop — How to write a magazine feature


Workshop news. I ran a taster session for the Chester IVC group last night [pictured above].
It was based around writing features for magazines and hosted by the Cross Keys pub in their upstairs room, plus fuelled by one of their Sunday roasts.
We developed some great story ideas on the night from travel to health via food and careers. Thanks to those who took part for sharing their ideas and writing in a supportive environment.
One key aspect of the workshop was about crafting your first line. As I explained:
“It’s really important as you win the reader in the first line. So make it good.”

We went on to talk about styles of introductions and how these can win over the reader to hook them into your story. Examples of intro include …

  • Provocative / intriguing to bring colour, contrast, impact
  • Narrative / anecdote as an oblique way into the story
  • Descriptive / scene setter to take the reader right into the story in an active and colourful way
  • Question to make the reader think
  • Direct speech  can look ugly but a great quote can have real impact
Some feedback on the night from the attendees includes the comments below.
“I had a fabulous time, really thought provoking and fun. Can’t wait until the next one.” — Emma
“Liked the setting and company. A great group of people.” — Alison
I’m planning more workshop for 2016 and there’s even an idea for a writing retreat in Wales. Sign up to my newsletter for more details.

A media taster session for the West Cheshire and North Wales Chamber of Commerce



I ran a taster session for my media-medira writing workshops with Tracy North of Outwrite PR.

It was a lunch event for the West Cheshire and Noth Wales Chamber of Commerce (WCNW Chamber) and the theme was how to get your story across.

There was a great response from people on the day with lots of questions and follow ups via Twitter but, for anyone who missed it, here are my top tips for making your news story or blog post stand out from the crowd.

Your story has to be worth reading. And to be worth reading it has to have a hook or an angle, that is something timely and compelling that makes it stand out.

So you need to think differently. But how?

  • 1) Find the news hook — think why now? What is the one piece of news you want to share? Eg. You’re launching a new product next week? You’ve just won an award? Your business is celebrating its first anniversary? If no hook, then no story.
  • 2) Put a human face on it — think how can your build empathy with your readers? Simple. People love to read about people, so don’t be afraid to personalise your story and share your own personal experience.
  • 3) Offer your expert views — can you explain a complex subject in a concise yet informative way and without blinding people with jargon? Great. Then put yourself forward. After all, the media thrives on comment.
  • 4) Elevate your story — think about how your story fits in with national/international trends and events? Eg. Budget statement last week? How did the Chancellors’ announcements impact on your business? Greek debt crisis? How does this relate to what’s happening in your business?
  • 5) Just say it — think about how to make your point clearly and concisely. My pet hates include waffle intros, lack of follow-up details and exclamation marks.

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The last workshop in the current series is looming.

This is round three in the triumvirate of summer writing workshops, taking place Thursday, July 16, 7-9pm at the CHIC co-working hub in Chester.

The topic for this session is writing fab features, followed by individual tuition — bring some work-in-progress writing for the latter, or we can review your homework so far.

Meanwhile, to start us thinking about this next session, I’d like to offer up one of my recent features. Please read the following article and then share your thoughts below.

Can you spot what techniques and tricks I have used in putting this story together? What do you think worked and what would you have done differently?

And when you post, please also include a something about yourself, so we can get to know each other before the workshop and start a dialogue as a group.


Unedited copy for Family Traveller Magazine (July/Aug issue 2015)

The chicken awaited its fate. As I looked on, Maya, my elder daughter, set about carving off the thighs with a degree of caution and scalpel-like precision. Olivia, her younger sister, meanwhile, simply grabbed a razor-sharp Sabatier and started hacking away at the uncooked carcass like a toddler version of The Muppets’ Swedish Chef. No doubt Gordon Ramsay tackles similar sibling rivalries in his own kitchen.

I had come to kitchens of Meyer’s Madhus (that’s Meyer’s Food House in English) in Copenhagen’s Norrebro district for the kids’ cooking school. My two little Bake-Off fans, Maya (nine) and Olivia (four), were getting stuck into filleting the fowl while I pondered how wise it was to encourage under tens to play with extra sharp knives. But that was the whole idea. From cookery camps to after-school cooking clubs, the Copenhagen cooking school established by the top chef and Noma co-founder Claus Meyer, is all about kids making friends with food.

“Denmark has been trying to backtrack in recent years to regain its connection to nature and natural produce,” explains the school’s executive chef Bo Frederiksen. “By taking kids out of their comfort zones, our courses offer a social activity with a higher educational purpose.”


Suddenly everyone is talking about food in Denmark. The New Nordic Kitchen movement, founded by Meyer and Noma co-owner René Redzepi in 2004, has reawakened interest in foraging for seasonal, sustainable and natural ingredients. The Michelin Guide has responded by awarding Copenhagen a new record of 17 Michelin stars across 15 restaurants. The company also recently launched its first New Nordic Cities Guide, dedicated to rise of Denmark and the other Scandinavian countries as world food hubs.

But it’s not all about Michelin stars and fine dining. Contributing to the New Kitchen Manifesto that kicked started the movement, Meyer noted simply, “Kids should cook”. By raising awareness of healthy eating and encouraging kids to foster an interest in organic gastronomy from an early age, he argued, food can become part of the solution to wider social issues.

It’s theme to be developed further this summer with the tenth anniversary of the Copenhagen Cooking Festival. Northern Europe’s leading food event will stage some 150 events at venues across the city from August 21 to 30. Key events for families this year include a Cooking Kids event at Copenhagen Madhus on August 25, a Taste of Copenhagen pop-up restaurant at the Design Museum from August 26-29 and the cornerstone Arla Food Fest, staged in the much-visited King’s Garden, from August 29-30.

The Festival also offers a platform for local organisations to stage events to strengthen awareness of the burgeoning Danish food culture. There are early results. Madkulturen (The Food Culture), an organisation founded by the Danish Ministry of Food, recently reported that 67% of Danish children aged 8-15 years old now help with preparing meals at home at least once a week.

“As Danes, we have started to take pride once more in our natural produce and traditional recipes,” says Festival Director Lonnie Svarre Hansen. “But it’s kids who will now take our food culture to the next level.”


In Meyer’s sleek, stainless steel kitchen, the menu of traditional Danish chicken fricassee with boiled potatoes, followed by rhubarb trifle served with cream, was being coordinated across four work stations by Head Chef Mette Strarup. Maya and Olivia put on their aprons, scrubbed their hands and prepared to see if they could stand the heat in the kitchen.

They quickly got stuck in, teaming up with a couple of 12-year-old Danish girls to happily chop vegetables, season sauces and prep the rhubarb for desert in a mix of Danish, English and hand gestures. The three-hour class was designed to take the group through the whole recipe, culminating with serving the meal like a restaurant service. I even felt a frisson of fatherly pride when, as Mette showed the class how to carve the chicken, my girls rolled up their sleeves while some of the Danish teens grumbled about handling the giblets.

“I really enjoy working with kids and seeing their confidence grow, both in terms of their social skills and their interest in food,” Mette tells me over a brief coffee break. “This is not school, I tell them. We’re all professionals now.”


Away from the kitchen, we also sampled lots of Copenhagen’s family-foodie hangouts during a long weekend in the Danish capital. On the first day we went for lunch at the newly opened Copenhagen Street Food, the Borough Market-style collection of food trucks and pop-up kiosks located in the northeastern Paper Island district between the Copenhagen Opera House and the Experimentarium City science museum. We tucked into organic Danish hotdogs and traditional potato-based open sandwiches amid an eco-buzz ambiance of recycled stalls and giant cushions around a warming giant pizza oven.

We spent the next day at the Tivoli Gardens, the historic theme park dating from 1843, making a beeline for Hans Christian Andersen’s Flying Trunk. The girls loved the ghost train-style ride through Andersen’s timeless fairytales, watching some of their favourite stories, such as The Princess and the Pea, come to life before our eyes as we trundled through in little carriages. Afterwards, we went for lunch at the newly opened Spisehuset restaurant in Tivoli, tucking into a picnic-basket-style lunch washed down with bottles of our new favorite Scandi pop drink, Faxe Kondi. The girls loved the restaurant’s playroom and the soundtrack of tweeting birds provided a soothing backdrop to lunch after the cacophony of spinning round on the Galley Ships ride beforehand.

But, food aside, how child friendly did Copenhagen prove to be? Nearly everyone speaks English and the infrastructure for families is good. We could eat early evening to avoid overtired late nights and most of the restaurants we visited seemed unfazed by an inquisitive four year old on the prowl. On the downside, however, it’s not the cheapest place for a city break and navigating the bus network to crises-cross the sprawling districts can be quite challenging, especially as a single parent with two young children and our luggage in tow. It was noticeable that nobody on the bus ever gave up a seat but as one Danish later friend said to me: “It’s a Viking thing. The Vikings always just did what they wanted.”


Back in the kitchen, things were hotting up. With 30 minutes to complete the two-course meal, Maya was busily adding lemon juice to the simmering rhubarb while Olivia helped head chef Matte to thicken the sauce for the chicken. Across the kitchen, 12-year-old Tobias, a veteran of several cookery classes, was chastising his team of three teenage boys for burning the butter with a fiery flourish worthy of the young Marco Pierre White.

“Yes, I’d like to be a chef,” he said, taking a temper-cooling breather on the terrace outside. “I love to cook and I love to eat. So why not?”

Just like a scene from the kitchen at Noma, however, the service came together at the last moment and we all sat down to eat around a large, communal table, toasting our success with glasses of organic juice. Maya and Olivia agreed that, while they may have different approaches to carving the chicken, an afternoon of intensive training in the art of the New Nordic Kitchen had left them feeling more inspired and confident to help with the dinner back home.

As part of the Copenhagen Cooking Festival, Meyer’s Madhus is helping with two events: the Food Courage Run, an assault course-style treasure hunt with a food theme on August 29; The Hour of Taste is a kids-only night with special menus for ages 5-15 at various restaurants around the city, including some Michelin-starred eateries. Profits from these will go back into its social-conscience charitable foundation Melting Pot, which aims to improve the quality of life of vulnerable groups through food craftsmanship.

“My grandmother was from rural Denmark the smell of homemade bread baking in the oven is one of my strongest childhood memories,” smiles Bo, as we polished off the last of the creamy, citrus-tangy desert.

“Passing our traditional cookery skills down the generations had lost its way,” he added. “But we’re starting to bridge the gap again. Kids see cookery as a social activity once more and, through food, they’re changing their view of the world.”




So, this Friday, then.

It’s round two in the triumvirate of summer writing workshops, taking place this month 10am to 12 noon at the CHIC co-working hub in Chester.

The topic for this session is writing the perfect pitch, followed by individual tuition — bring some work-in-progress writing for the latter, such as a blog post, draft feature etc.

Meanwhile, to start us thinking about this next session, I’d like to offer up two of my recent pitches. Please read the following two pitches and then share your thoughts below.

Do you think one of both have been commissioned? Which one/s and why? How could I have improved on these pitches to secure the gig?

And when you post, please also include a brief introduction about yourself, so we can get to know each other before the workshop and start a dialogue as a group.

1) Ideas / Flanders / art installation in June

The windswept Flanders coast is not the first place you would look for contemporary art.
But the Triennial of Contemporary Art by the Sea has been embedding large-scale public artworks into the Belgian coastline over the years.
The fifth Beaufort Festival of public art opens June 21 and runs to September 21 this year. It takes the theme of Beyond Borders and features a series of giant artworks by a group of international artists, such as the British artist Scott King, at locations including Ostend and Art Deco De Haan.
The ten resorts that make up the 42-mile sweep of the Flanders coast offer a little-known escape for foodies, families and locals seeking a sandy-beach alternative to the Mediterranean stampede.
This year art will be put the region back on the map for European explorers with an eye for art, design and architecture.
I’ve covered Flanders for the section before — see Rubens in Antwerp (Jan 2015, link). More from my portfolio at atkinsondavid.com.


2) Ideas / West Sweden / midsummer in June

Midsummer is more than just another day to the Swedes.
The midsummer festival has always been a major celebration in Sweden and, today, it’s more culturally important than ever, a way for the urbane, modern Swede to tap into the country’s ancient mythology and folklore.
It’s a return to nature, a way to connect with ancestors and a celebration of the longest day of the year with food, friends and family. To travel to Sweden during midsummer is a chance to connect with Swedes in a very grass-roots way.
I will uncover the myths and traditions of midsummer with a trip to West Sweden. My journey starts in Gothenburg and leads out into the archipelago, combining city-break attractions with some back-to-nature island hopping.
Along the way will be maypole dancing, public displays of dancing, flowers under my pillow to dream of future lovers and lessons in making my own ‘krans’, the laurel-wreath headwear associated with midsummer.
I’ve recently covered Sweden for Rough Guides — see 10 ways to spend summer in Sweden (link). More from my portfolio at atkinsondavid.com.


I look forward to seeing everyone Friday 12, 10am.

Please call or email with any questions.